IndiaStar Review of Books


 

Freedom Song
by Amit Chaudhuri

New York: Knopf, 1999
434 pages $24

Reviewed by C. J. S. Wallia

 

Freedom Song
by Amit Chaudhuri

New York: Knopf, 1999
434 pages $24

Reviewed by C. J. S. Wallia

Amit Chaudhuri's Freedom Song is a collection of three short novels which were first published in Britain as separate volumes: A Strange and Sublime Address, (1991); Afternoon Raag, (1993); and Freedom Song, (1998). Chaudhuri received considerable critical acclaim for these novellas-- for example, The London Review of Books said: "... he writes better than just about anyone of his generation." In May 2000, Chaudhuri won the Los Angeles Times award for fiction.

Although not much happens in any of the novellas, they succeed in presenting exquisite miniatures of middle-class life in contemporary metropolitan India. The publisher has inserted summaries of each novella up front; otherwise, the reader would need quite some time figuring out the relationships between characters--Chaudhuri's storytelling overlooks this.

"A Strange and Sublime Address" paints languorous impressions of life in Calcutta as seen by a ten-year-old boy, Sandeep, during two vacations from his schooling in Bombay. At his uncle's Calcutta house, on one occasion, the narrator looks through a shutter: "A bhelpuri vendor was wandering past, his prop under his arm, the basket of bhelpuri balanced almost stylishy, like a Malayasian fedora, on his head. Later, the key man went by, with a cluster of keys around a large ring, the metal shimmering against the sun, the keys jangling. The vendor had called out in a loud voice, 'Bhelpuri!' but the key man had said nothing; he had simply shaken the ring and let the jangling keys speak for him. The strange metallic whisper of the keys could be heard, immaterial and ghostly, even when the man had disappeared, seemingly evaporated by the heat."

On another occasion, the narrator roams in the neighborhood, keenly observing minutiae and wondering what sort of story a writer would weave around such observations: "...the story would never be a satisfying one, because the writer, like Sandeep, would be too caught up jotting down the irrelevancies and digressions that make up lives, and the life of a city, rather than a good story --till the reader would shout 'Come to the point.'"
"Come to the point" Chaudhuri does not; however, his descriptions cast a spell.

"Afternoon Raag" is a first-person portrayal of the narrator's student days at Oxford -- his casual involvement with two female students; nostalgic memories of his parents in India; and his fond recall of the classical music teacher in India. Structured loosely like a Hindustani "raag," this novella's prose rises to the poetic.

"Freedom Song," set in the early 1990's, describes the life history of two interrelated middle-class Calcutta families. The publisher's introductory summary notes: two of the main characters, Khuku and Mini, "spend their time talking about family, friends, health, and occasionally, Muslims and the Babri Masjid." The summary errs-not"occasionally," they talk frequently about the Muslims.

"Freedom Song" opens with Khuku's being awakened too early in the morning by the loud Muslim prayer and her guest, Mini, commiserating at this nuisance: "They are going too far! And it isn't really Indian, it sounds like Bedouins." And "Each day, at some point, they talked of the Muslims. They talked of how, by the next century, there would be more Muslims than Hindus in the country. Mini being the teacher, had the facts and figures..." During another talk, Mini says, "What if one mosque had gone -- for hundreds of temples had been destroyed before. She could not understand what the fuss was about...." "Who'll rebuild those temples?" Khuku agrees: "That's right. No one talks about them." Mini decides to vote for the Hindu nationalist party, BJP: "It was no bad thing that they toppled that mosque."

Despite these contentious remarks, "Freedom Song," like the other two novellas, lacks in narrative tension. Rendered in evocative prose, Chaudhuri's carefully observed writing remains at the surface, confining itself to the thin segment of the upper-middle class. Nowhere is there a mention of the squalor and abysmal poverty of the Calcutta slums, even though the point of view chosen is third-person omniscient. In the earlier novellas, the childlike and adolescent points of view make the surface observations easier to accept.

The details of daily Indian life Chaudhury so masterfully depicts will appeal more to the Western reader's exotic quest, and will probably seem all too ordinary to the Indian reader.